Thursday 6 August 2015

The Miraculous Machine By Teresa

The Miraculous Machine


The old flying machine was brown and was built with wood.It had wings.It had rusty equipment on it, the owner Steve was so proud of it. The old flying machine was very tall and had a pirate ship steering wheel. It was very dusty. It had very big old wheels. The wings were strong and fapped in the wind. It was the most amazing thing anyone has built. It was remarkable. When it took off it made a chugging noise chuga chuga chuga and it few like a fast fish swimming in the ocean.  It smelt like old rusty cutlery and ragged old wood. It felt like a dusty cardboard box smooth and bumpy at the same time. It was unusual.and his flying machine,
By Teresa

2 comments:

  1. Nice story Teresa or Miss Prentice. I like the way that you used those interesting words. By Galaxy

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